Logs of Pine


What cruel Grand Design

with simple logs of pine

could give to the divine

sacrifice of life for mine

a life so full of sinful crime

yet now saved for all of time

by the suffering of David’s line

and blood that once turned water into wine?

I will serve him and so shine

the light of Christ and the divine

to show the world, saved for all of time

what work was done with logs of pine.

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About The Lost Poet

I write because I find inspiration. It is my hope that through my writing some connections may be felt. Everything I write comes from my experiences with life, and with the people that I love. I try to remember to see myself in everyone, and everyone in myself.
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17 Responses to Logs of Pine

  1. bendedspoon says:

    nothing but praise for the poem and the Saviour! 🙂

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  2. Jingle says:

    divine work from logs of pine,

    what a fun rhyming piece,
    welcome to poets rally, have fun.
    🙂

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  3. Rajlakshmi says:

    beautifully rhymed… loved the flow
    well expressed.

    Thursday Rally

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  4. Ms. Queenly says:

    Very nice. The sentiment is felt. And I, too, must agree that rhyming is well thought out and timed.

    ~queenly~

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  5. haggishead says:

    I really like this one 🙂 (the best I read this week till now)

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  6. 43spiders says:

    That was rather nice…

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  7. Vinay says:

    well expressed.. the sentiment reminds me of how we cremate the dead here.. on logs of firewood.. its sort of tradition I think..

    Here’s My Poetry For The Rally

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  8. Neeraja says:

    Nicely written. Simple and so rhythmic. Keep writing!

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  9. And the concluding lines are what I notice the most in a poem, and well written they are in your piece of poetry (:

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  10. C Rose says:

    What a touching way to speak of the spirit in our living realm. Beautiful piece ~ Rose

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  11. Kevin Lamb says:

    From your title “Lost Poet” I had a feeling you were one of the good ones… and I was right! Lovely words!

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  12. belladonna23 says:

    nice way to tie the ending back to the beginning, and good constant tone

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  13. anjuartwriter says:

    service to the divine-great poem

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