What cruel Grand Design
with simple logs of pine
could give to the divine
sacrifice of life for mine
a life so full of sinful crime
yet now saved for all of time
by the suffering of David’s line
and blood that once turned water into wine?
I will serve him and so shine
the light of Christ and the divine
to show the world, saved for all of time
what work was done with logs of pine.
The Lost Poet 
nothing but praise for the poem and the Saviour! š
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divine work from logs of pine,
what a fun rhyming piece,
welcome to poets rally, have fun.
š
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Good rhymes!
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beautifully rhymed… loved the flow
well expressed.
Thursday Rally
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Very nice. The sentiment is felt. And I, too, must agree that rhyming is well thought out and timed.
~queenly~
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I really like this one š (the best I read this week till now)
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That was rather nice…
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Wonderful poem.
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well expressed.. the sentiment reminds me of how we cremate the dead here.. on logs of firewood.. its sort of tradition I think..
Here’s My Poetry For The Rally
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Impressive
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Nicely written. Simple and so rhythmic. Keep writing!
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And the concluding lines are what I notice the most in a poem, and well written they are in your piece of poetry (:
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What a touching way to speak of the spirit in our living realm. Beautiful piece ~ Rose
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From your title “Lost Poet” I had a feeling you were one of the good ones… and I was right! Lovely words!
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nice way to tie the ending back to the beginning, and good constant tone
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see yoou soon?
Luna
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service to the divine-great poem
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